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    response letter示例

    1、Firstly, we would like to thank you for your kind letter and for reviewers’ constructive comments concerning our article (Manuscript No.:XXXXX).These comments are all valuable and helpful for improving our article. All the authors have seriously discussed about all these comments. According to the reviewers’comments, we have tried best to modify our manuscript to meet with the requirements of your journal. In this revised version, changes to our manuscript within the document were all highlighted by using red colored text.Point-by-point responses to the reviewers are listed below this letter. 2、If there are any other modifications we could make, we would like very much to modify them and we really appreciate your help. Thank you very much for your help. 3、Thanks. We have corrected these mistakes based on your suggestions. 4、Thank you again for your positive comments and valuable suggestions toimprove the quality of our manuscript. 5、we were really sorry for your careless mistakes. Thank you for your reminding. 6、Thanks for your nice suggestions. We have formatted all the references. 7、It is with excitement that I resubmit to you a revised version of manuscript (稿号) for the 杂志名. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to revise and resubmit this manuscript. In keeping with my last communication with you, I am resubmitting this revision before the agreed upondeadline. I appreciate the time and detail provided by each reviewer and by you and have incorporated the suggested changes into the manuscript to the best of my ability. The manuscript has certainly benefited from these insightful revision suggestions. I look forward to working with you and the reviewers to move this manuscript closer to publication in the杂志名. (返修有拖延时用) 8、I have responded specifically to each suggestion below, beginning with your own. To make the changes easier to identify where necessary, I have numbered them. 9、Thank you again for your positive comments on our manuscript. 杂志名 is an influential journal which aims to improve ourunde

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    Artifacts VS OPA

    1 过程财富库的含义 CMMI中提到的organizational process assets 通常翻译为组织过程资产或者是组织过程财富,可以简写为OPA。 什么是OPA呢?按照V1.3中的术语定义: Artifacts that relate to describing, implementing, and improving processes. Examples of these artifacts include policies, measurement descriptions, process descriptions, process implementation support tools. The term “process assets” is used to indicate that these artifacts are developed or acquired to meet the business objectives of the organization and that they represent investments by the organization that are expected to provide current and future business value. (See also “process asset library.”) 对上述的定义需要这么来理解: (1) the artifacts of describing processes,描述过程的制品,如方针、度量元定义、过程定义、规程定义、指南等; (2) the artifacts of implementing processes,实施过程的制品,如文档模板、过程裁剪报告、检查单等; (3) the artifacts of improving processes,改进过程的制品,如过程改进建议、经验教训总结等; 之所以用”assets”这个单词是从投资回报的角度来讲,过程财富不是只有投入没有产出的,是可以给我们带来回报的,过程财富服务于商业目标的。 在OPD过程域中SP 1.7 Establish Rules and Guidelines for Teams中还描述了在组织过程资产中还包括了: 团队结构指南; 团队信息指南; 团队授权和职责指南; 建立沟通渠道、授权和扩编指南; 团队负责人筛选准则等。 由以上可以看出,凡事在组织内有共享价值的与管理有关的资料都可以称为过程财富。 2 过程财富库中的内容 对于过程财富库在CMMI中做了如下的定义: A library of information used to store and make process assets available that are useful to those who are defining, implementing, and managing processes in the organization. This library contains process assets that include process related documentation such as policies, defined processes, checklists, lessons learned documents, templates, standards, procedures, plans, and training materials. 对于过程财富库中的内容在SP 1.5 Establish the Organization’s Process Asset Library中作了如下的举例: 过程财富库中包含了如下的内容: 组织级的方针; 过程描述; 规程(如估算规程); 开发计划; 采购计划; 质量保证计划; 培训材料; 过程支持工具(如检查单); 经验教训报告等。 在这个举例中,列举的3个计划,可以理解为是计划的模板,而不是某个项目的具体计划,如果是理解为某个项目的具

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